Chapter 1
Omg this day was horrible nothing was going right, well maybe I should tell you what happened first .okay it all started when I woke up I was getting out of bed and my annoying kid brother had snuck in my room again and poured out all my perfumes and tried to make magical potions ( what a dork ),apparently he forgot to clean up his mess so I slipped on the perfumes and landed flat on my butt and I got perfume all over my favorite hello kitty pajamas . The worst part happened at school I was trying to open my locker it would not open I kept on trying and trying and trying it just wouldn’t nudge on the 15th try I finally realized that the locker I was trying to get open was actually Ashlee bennit the most popular and ,mean girl in the whole school the way I found out that it was her locker was that she was tapping on my shoulder and said “uh hum isn’t the ugly girls locker over there” . I was so frustrated that I was trying to open last years locker . I don’t even get why she said ugly girls locker I mean I am not ugly actually I have won 4 beauty pageants and one of the pageants was against Ashlee and I won ,I beat her . Probably she is still jealous and hates me for beating her .I hate when people hold grudges for so long that really gets under my skin .well back to my horrible day when I got home from school my mom apparently got a call from my principle and I got the longest and worst lecture ever ! Here’s what my mom said “ Danielle I cant believe you are failing algebra you never seem like your self anymore you used so sweet to all your teachers and you’d always bring home straight a’s now all you do is complain how you English teacher gives to much homework. She knows how much I hate being called Danielle all my friends just call me Danni . well the best part of my day was trying to go to bed which I really should get back to.
Chapter 2
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh what’s happening oh wait it was just a dream wow that was the worst nightmare ever .I had a dream that I was trying to open Ashlee bennits locker and then she told me that I was at the wrong locker. Um Danni I know you probably don’t want to hear this from your best friend but that wasn’t a dream that was reality . Oh Anna what will I do I will be the center of attention just because of my little incident . Ugh school stink’s I never want to go again ,well you have to or you’ll be a drop out and that would be worse than being the center of attention because then I will have no one to tell me which shirt looks the best on me . Well that’s right but ughhh I still hate school !
-SoccerIsAwesome
Omg this day was horrible nothing was going right, well maybe I should tell you what happened first .okay it all started when I woke up I was getting out of bed and my annoying kid brother had snuck in my room again and poured out all my perfumes and tried to make magical potions ( what a dork ),apparently he forgot to clean up his mess so I slipped on the perfumes and landed flat on my butt and I got perfume all over my favorite hello kitty pajamas . The worst part happened at school I was trying to open my locker it would not open I kept on trying and trying and trying it just wouldn’t nudge on the 15th try I finally realized that the locker I was trying to get open was actually Ashlee bennit the most popular and ,mean girl in the whole school the way I found out that it was her locker was that she was tapping on my shoulder and said “uh hum isn’t the ugly girls locker over there” . I was so frustrated that I was trying to open last years locker . I don’t even get why she said ugly girls locker I mean I am not ugly actually I have won 4 beauty pageants and one of the pageants was against Ashlee and I won ,I beat her . Probably she is still jealous and hates me for beating her .I hate when people hold grudges for so long that really gets under my skin .well back to my horrible day when I got home from school my mom apparently got a call from my principle and I got the longest and worst lecture ever ! Here’s what my mom said “ Danielle I cant believe you are failing algebra you never seem like your self anymore you used so sweet to all your teachers and you’d always bring home straight a’s now all you do is complain how you English teacher gives to much homework. She knows how much I hate being called Danielle all my friends just call me Danni . well the best part of my day was trying to go to bed which I really should get back to.
Chapter 2
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh what’s happening oh wait it was just a dream wow that was the worst nightmare ever .I had a dream that I was trying to open Ashlee bennits locker and then she told me that I was at the wrong locker. Um Danni I know you probably don’t want to hear this from your best friend but that wasn’t a dream that was reality . Oh Anna what will I do I will be the center of attention just because of my little incident . Ugh school stink’s I never want to go again ,well you have to or you’ll be a drop out and that would be worse than being the center of attention because then I will have no one to tell me which shirt looks the best on me . Well that’s right but ughhh I still hate school !
-SoccerIsAwesome
4 comments:
that story is sooo cool i wish i could right like that!!!
wow wow wow i loved it it kept me wanting to keep reading i want more it was soooooooooooooooooo good well tell the author i loved it and they should get it published
Honestly, it was very unconventional and made no sense.
lotsa run-on sentences. wtc?
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